After I played this game, I'm still understand the story. But when I got the ending, it makes me so confused. Could anyone explain what's going on? Why there's so many people (girls) that come out of nowhere?
You know I'm still waiting for a water world reference I want them see it goes back to normal with the girls they should watch a movie and I can be just to play on the fear that Lily have for the ocean
I don't understand why you're bothering with a "remake" before the game is finished. For those invested in the story, it has now been put on hold for an indeterminate amount of time while you go back and redo things. For me, I just want to continue the story. I have no interest in replaying the entire thing. There isn't anything that is so bad that basically warrants starting over. Story things can be fixed retroactively as things progress by giving them reasonable in-universe explanations. I'd wait until it's finished and then reevaluate things at that point. As with most art forms, it'll never look quite right until it has actually been completed. You will always find things to "fix". Nothing will ever get done if you constantly go back and redo things.
Man i have to say the game is very well done, it's very similar to Champion of the realms but IS SO MUCH BETTER i am afraid to finish the current version because i got very fond of the characters hehe so i will take my time and play slowly
Not a lot that I can say about this game, probably one of the best in this category of games, the Chapters are consistent and long, the story is well written as the character are, moments where (if played seriously) the game really stroke your heart a Little, just straight up majestic work, a single comment can't help a lot but I hope the message can help: even if pratically "finished" , keep up the fantastic job of creating games that actually has a good storyline behind!
Yo i respect the creator i played this game and heavily enjoyed it even tho the mc was a bit of a wimp but i understand bro had 20 girls tryna smash but in all giggles and shit aside this game has a great storyline there are issus but hey try being in his shoes and he or she has kids i understand bro you are goated id love to talk about how i can create my own game like this eventually love the work cant wait for the revamp
(meant as constructive feedback, sorry when it does sound too harsh)
next to the images the text is the import part of the game - and I think the size is too small and using the normal view (default text box, quick menu enabled) the interface is rather cluttered, distracting from the written story.
I would welcome a text size slider, the built-in options (switching to a different text box style, disabling the quick menu) are at least for my eyes not enough :)
but anyway, as I'm still interested in the plot I poked around in your scripts and increased the default font size from 30 to 40. let's see how the plot develops!
I have to say.. I've said a few times over the past year/year and a half I've started getting into VNs that I've found some of the best and this DEFINITELY goes into the top 5 all time. The story is wonderful and I have to give you points for the choices actually feeling like they matter as quite a few games while it seems like you have a choice it all leads off to the same path or it's something as simple as Option 1: Be a complete and total dick. Option 2: Be nice. The meta humor in this is so nice so many games with this meta humor just kinda joke it off or something afterwards this game openly breaks the 4th wall and makes it part of the plot point at one point, the humor is just so refreshing overall. Characters are all written great I didn't come across one character that I was like well... you have little to no development or your a 1 sided character with the personality of cardboard. Even some of the lesser focused on characters are fleshed out more than some game's main characters, hell at the end of the game on the final part a new character is introduce and has about a grand total of 15-20 minutes of screen time and you get a good run down on them not many people can do it this well. Also congrats on also making the porn more than just porn but rather a functional plot point instead of just okay this is when you can jerk off now and repeat it as much times as needed during the main story.
I went through the entire game 3 times to try and unlock the Sina beach scene without realizing you just had to do the other scenes first. So for all those wondering why the "One of a Kind" beach scene is grayed out, just do the others ones first and as long as you meet the requirements it will unlock.
Just a forewarning, the girls icons in the stats menu give away spoilers. Zoey (the zombie) is right away shown with her human skin, spoiling the whole heartbeat and coming alive story. And Vivian's icon spoils the fact that she gets blonde hair. Just something to think about, other than that I really freaking love this game. Not many games I get this invested in, so keep up the amazing work. I really wish it was finished because once I reach the end of the updates I'll be longing for more! Download this if you're thinking about it and reading this, trust me.
I'm only at the bridge scene where you meet the 4 girls after the Jynlea dreamwalking scene where she gets the cut on her leg. No spoilers in the replies please
How dare you..... lmao. It's where I'm most active though, I'll admit. I've been beyond busy and exhausted, I haven't had time to post much here or anywhere outside my Discord.
When i first played this game i got hooked to the point i played thru all the content in a few days. The character development perfect,humor perfect,story and plotwists perfect this is honestly now one of my favorites vn's in itch keep it up.
No problem, if you advance further in the story you will see a part where they show posters of various games that the author likes and a poster of Serenity will appear there. PD: I chose Matrix XD
No no, he got a point! Even though it's a Serenity reference "I've already played it!" There really was no option to put this dragon girl in her place, she was extremely feisty and prick!
I caved. Wanted to refresh myself on the story and events thus far while waiting for the update to fully be out.
The new UI is much sleeker than I was expecting and the contents of the Extras tab makes me look more forward to future updates than I already was!
Can't wait for the next release, hope things go by smoothly for you!
Edit: Scroll wheel doesn't seem to work on the stats screen for some reason. I also noticed that sometimes the text also gets buried underneath the Quick Menu buttons.
Not a bug and I know I mentioned it before but it still bugs me that when Jyn looks into MC's memories she only comments on Elizabeth's eyes and not how their school nurse is also an angel
Did I miss that bit with Elizabeth still? Lol, oopsies... as for the scroll wheel, that one won't work much without updating Ren'Py. So I'll either look into updating it, or leave it as is for now till I sit down for the Remake project, lol.
Whoops lol. Maybe it's adjusted on the version you're working on!
Either way, am looking forward to the rest! Truly a hidden gem with a very fun and interesting story with an equally fun and interesting cast of characters
Scroll works on the stats screen as long as your mouse cursor is to the right of the scrollbar. I think its a Renpy engine thing, not a "making a game" thing. Other games are worse and make you click a button to scroll.
Also, Jyn is theoretically the only one who could have already known Elizabeth is from Elysium with her Dreamwalking abilities. 13th Sin can use that as an excuse as to why she might not have mentioned it. Plus, she was probably too focused on IMMEDIATELY getting pained upon after noticing Elizabeth, I bet that inferno was at least a bit distracting.
So the "Demo" part is just for the new content that was supposed to be for the full release of 0.3.4 (which is right after the Beach events). You can expect the rest of the demo within a month or two! Time isn't on my side, but I will work as much as I can on it
The arch with the running competition is fucked up. I haven't been this mad in a long time. Those 4 stupid cunts, I don't want them in the game at all. They just bullying the mc, not just hit on him, but arrogantly bullying him.They haven't done anything useful yet, and they're not worth anything by themselves, so why does the mc just put up with them? Fuck these hoes. Just fuckin kill them in the next update.
I've just finished the game. That was a lot of content, it surprised me. Best girl is Sinerva due to having the best backstory and character arc. If there is one flaw (ok, there's more than one) it's the inconsistency of the main character. In one scene he tells one of the loveinterests "I've never lied in my life" and in the next scene he lies to the girls... that kinda irked me a bit, but you (and the MC) did acknowledge it later on in the game (and he becomes more consistent). One other thing is that all the girls are like, "oh, he's so dreamy and handsome... I want his baby!" right away when they meet the MC, making them seem shallow (perhaps it has something to do with the markings on their bellies). I know it's a power fantasy, but I do wish there was a bit more realistic romantic development, instead of "ooooh, he gives me a girl boner and I'm lonely." Not always the case for some of them (Sinerva comes to mind, but like I said, best character arc), but it's for most of them.
And I can't believe I'm saying this, but there are too many girls... and more and more are keep getting introduced (boom, and welcome to the harem, we don't know who you are but welcome to the group). That means not all of them are getting the character development they deserve (besides slightly more advanced background characters). Sometimes it feels like "too many cooks", but in this case it's "too many waifus".
The game feels like it's reaching its climax and there are still girls who haven't had their full character arc yet. Unless there is way more to come... I do hope so. If not, then there are simply put too many girls. Perhaps it would be interesting to see if there will be casualties. I know it's mean to say that I want characters to be killed off, but storywise it would be an interesting development (for the MC as well). Gives the story more danger, gravitas and stakes and such (if I was in the writers chair, I would probably do something like that, but that's me). All in all, I did enjoy it.
7/10 (4 stars)
(Ed, Edd and Eddy, really??? (:-3 , you're showing your age there, hahaha!)
You have a valid argument but I would also argue that most people play these VN for the H content and it becomes frustrating if there is too much content between these moments, and its completely fine if you believe there is too many girls and I agree there could be more depth to each one but wanting them killed off is extreme especially in erotic VN because its a major turn off and can even straight make people drop the game. Look at "Champion of Realms" for example they killed off one of their neko girls and just look at the comments on that one. Nearly ever comment mentions how fucked up the scene was.
Bah, I have to agree with @Nederbeest, bro. There are a lot of Waifu's, but many of them don't have a decent background to call attention, they are shallow and superfluous characters! I can count on my fingers that there are a few Waifu that caught my attention in this game, one of them was Seraph 13, Zoe "zumbi girl", Daughter of Rosalyn "The Vampire", Alyssa and Sinavera!
For the rest, I just erased it from my mind, it's there just to weigh the game and nothing else, and if one of them died, it wouldn't be much missed. Since most events with this character are the true "Turn off!" with Ex; it would be Jade's event with MC at her book club, where she literally rapes the MC. it's pejorative to say that, but it's true, at that moment, the player didn't have the choice of wanting to follow her route or not. and in the end, she ends up getting pregnant because she wasn't taking the crappy medicine to fight the heat.
Another is, would be the race event against Sora, Man, that was ridiculous, she just teleported throughout the race, without giving the MC a chance to compete, a 500-year-old angel losing in the most ridiculous and idiotic way possible! and as a punishment, you are forced to "Sleep" with Sora and Fuyumi, and once again the player has no choice to refuse this event, I don't know .... that was so ridiculous that I almost dropped the game. and when the beach event on her birthday arrives, I find out that they are both pregnant.
Anyway, I don't know what your issue is with "Champion of Realms" about Emiko's death, and I also don't understand what happened to players who abandoned the game after witnessing her death. I read some reviews and others!
But, I have to agree that it was a heavy scene, even for me who hate Neko Girl's. I found that scene too fucked up, but we have to admit that it gave a huge weight for the MC to change both physically and mentally, and unlike other players who left the game for little things, it simply motivated me to play more.
The difference between the two games is that even adding new girls, "Champion of Realms" comes out ahead since most of the girls added have a background that makes you pay attention, which is where Fall of Angels fails a lot!
The only thing that holds me back in Fall of Angels, besides my few Waifu, is the MC's beef with Zanera with King Maverick!
Once it finishes downloading from MEGA, the file then downloads straight to your computer/laptops downloads file on your PC, you don't need to directly download it from ITCH, files that are directly downloaded from ITCH are always less than 1GB (once over 1GB, it goes to MEGA or other 3rd party sites.)
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After I played this game, I'm still understand the story. But when I got the ending, it makes me so confused. Could anyone explain what's going on? Why there's so many people (girls) that come out of nowhere?
i loved the game and i'm sooooo ready for Chapter 4 just take your time :3
i seriously forgot that its an eroge game the story is better than 90% of the story games lol
i like the story ngl
Weird i'm not feeling any horny at all every time a sex scene, i'm just feel sad
App not installed problem 😐😐
Three complaints:
1. The options are pointless. Why put in a secondary option if all he's going to do is call me a monster for choosing no and then do it anyway?
2. I get that it's an adult game, but why can't the MC choose whether or not to kiss/sleep with/impregnate these thots?
3. The chapter screens take too long.
you done and first say ty for them to make this game i bet it take a long ass time to do it all
ok
Hi, how are you? :P
Kind of spoilers ahead so be careful
You know I'm still waiting for a water world reference I want them see it goes back to normal with the girls they should watch a movie and I can be just to play on the fear that Lily have for the ocean
Can't romance Giantess?
I don't understand why you're bothering with a "remake" before the game is finished. For those invested in the story, it has now been put on hold for an indeterminate amount of time while you go back and redo things.
For me, I just want to continue the story. I have no interest in replaying the entire thing. There isn't anything that is so bad that basically warrants starting over. Story things can be fixed retroactively as things progress by giving them reasonable in-universe explanations.
I'd wait until it's finished and then reevaluate things at that point.
As with most art forms, it'll never look quite right until it has actually been completed. You will always find things to "fix". Nothing will ever get done if you constantly go back and redo things.
Dude even if this wasn't a hentai game I would still love it. ITS SO DAMN FUNNY AND THE STORY LINE IS AMAZING
Man i have to say the game is very well done, it's very similar to Champion of the realms but IS SO MUCH BETTER i am afraid to finish the current version because i got very fond of the characters hehe so i will take my time and play slowly
Not a lot that I can say about this game, probably one of the best in this category of games, the Chapters are consistent and long, the story is well written as the character are, moments where (if played seriously) the game really stroke your heart a Little, just straight up majestic work, a single comment can't help a lot but I hope the message can help: even if pratically "finished" , keep up the fantastic job of creating games that actually has a good storyline behind!
Hey I'm running into an issue where my screen is white and black, I can still see the text but nothing else
Issue fixed, had to restart the app
Is it a sandbox or is the gameplay fully linear?
Linear, but there are a few optional choices that'll let you participate in activites or branch off a path
The Android version is not wanting to download
Its a "mega" download so I highly recommend getting the MEGA app. The browser version on Android just doesn't work 99% of the time
Yo i respect the creator i played this game and heavily enjoyed it even tho the mc was a bit of a wimp but i understand bro had 20 girls tryna smash but in all giggles and shit aside this game has a great storyline there are issus but hey try being in his shoes and he or she has kids i understand bro you are goated id love to talk about how i can create my own game like this eventually love the work cant wait for the revamp
I am downloading with mega app still facing "app not installed" problem
What kinds of kinks are in this game?
(meant as constructive feedback, sorry when it does sound too harsh)
next to the images the text is the import part of the game - and I think the size is too small and using the normal view (default text box, quick menu enabled) the interface is rather cluttered, distracting from the written story.
I would welcome a text size slider, the built-in options (switching to a different text box style, disabling the quick menu) are at least for my eyes not enough :)
but anyway, as I'm still interested in the plot I poked around in your scripts and increased the default font size from 30 to 40. let's see how the plot develops!
I have to say.. I've said a few times over the past year/year and a half I've started getting into VNs that I've found some of the best and this DEFINITELY goes into the top 5 all time. The story is wonderful and I have to give you points for the choices actually feeling like they matter as quite a few games while it seems like you have a choice it all leads off to the same path or it's something as simple as Option 1: Be a complete and total dick. Option 2: Be nice. The meta humor in this is so nice so many games with this meta humor just kinda joke it off or something afterwards this game openly breaks the 4th wall and makes it part of the plot point at one point, the humor is just so refreshing overall. Characters are all written great I didn't come across one character that I was like well... you have little to no development or your a 1 sided character with the personality of cardboard. Even some of the lesser focused on characters are fleshed out more than some game's main characters, hell at the end of the game on the final part a new character is introduce and has about a grand total of 15-20 minutes of screen time and you get a good run down on them not many people can do it this well. Also congrats on also making the porn more than just porn but rather a functional plot point instead of just okay this is when you can jerk off now and repeat it as much times as needed during the main story.
Totally amazing, but damn you for that cliffhanger
Wonder what Julie will use that Energy Powered LMG on? Lmao
Loved this, cant wait for more
I went through the entire game 3 times to try and unlock the Sina beach scene without realizing you just had to do the other scenes first. So for all those wondering why the "One of a Kind" beach scene is grayed out, just do the others ones first and as long as you meet the requirements it will unlock.
Big Mama is something of a little grind... lol
I just downloaded a few PC games that I really wanted to play and I'm ignoring them for this game and story. I hope you feel proud
Just a forewarning, the girls icons in the stats menu give away spoilers. Zoey (the zombie) is right away shown with her human skin, spoiling the whole heartbeat and coming alive story. And Vivian's icon spoils the fact that she gets blonde hair. Just something to think about, other than that I really freaking love this game. Not many games I get this invested in, so keep up the amazing work. I really wish it was finished because once I reach the end of the updates I'll be longing for more! Download this if you're thinking about it and reading this, trust me.
I'm only at the bridge scene where you meet the 4 girls after the Jynlea dreamwalking scene where she gets the cut on her leg. No spoilers in the replies please
ima be honest i forgot this game existed because i have not joined the discord lol
How dare you..... lmao. It's where I'm most active though, I'll admit. I've been beyond busy and exhausted, I haven't had time to post much here or anywhere outside my Discord.
I am facing problem of "app nkt installed" on phone what to do??
I need help trying to get the Zoe sex scene can anyone help I just need a guide
Can go into the options menu and turn on Walkthrough mode. Will outright tell you what choices give you points with characters
When i first played this game i got hooked to the point i played thru all the content in a few days. The character development perfect,humor perfect,story and plotwists perfect this is honestly now one of my favorites vn's in itch keep it up.
Shame we didn't get a option to kill or atleast violate Rin. Annoying dragon bitch needs to put in her place.
Dude, that part was just a special scene that has almost nothing to do with the game, it's just a reference to a game the author liked, "Serenity".
Have not heard of Serenity, but thanks for explaining the scene.
Had to let of steam since holy fuck was that scene and girl annoying. :P
No problem, if you advance further in the story you will see a part where they show posters of various games that the author likes and a poster of Serenity will appear there. PD: I chose Matrix XD
No no, he got a point! Even though it's a Serenity reference "I've already played it!" There really was no option to put this dragon girl in her place, she was extremely feisty and prick!
I caved. Wanted to refresh myself on the story and events thus far while waiting for the update to fully be out.
The new UI is much sleeker than I was expecting and the contents of the Extras tab makes me look more forward to future updates than I already was!
Can't wait for the next release, hope things go by smoothly for you!
Edit: Scroll wheel doesn't seem to work on the stats screen for some reason. I also noticed that sometimes the text also gets buried underneath the Quick Menu buttons.
Not a bug and I know I mentioned it before but it still bugs me that when Jyn looks into MC's memories she only comments on Elizabeth's eyes and not how their school nurse is also an angel
Did I miss that bit with Elizabeth still? Lol, oopsies... as for the scroll wheel, that one won't work much without updating Ren'Py. So I'll either look into updating it, or leave it as is for now till I sit down for the Remake project, lol.
Whoops lol. Maybe it's adjusted on the version you're working on!
Either way, am looking forward to the rest! Truly a hidden gem with a very fun and interesting story with an equally fun and interesting cast of characters
Scroll works on the stats screen as long as your mouse cursor is to the right of the scrollbar. I think its a Renpy engine thing, not a "making a game" thing. Other games are worse and make you click a button to scroll.
Also, Jyn is theoretically the only one who could have already known Elizabeth is from Elysium with her Dreamwalking abilities. 13th Sin can use that as an excuse as to why she might not have mentioned it. Plus, she was probably too focused on IMMEDIATELY getting pained upon after noticing Elizabeth, I bet that inferno was at least a bit distracting.
will this game be long term or just Demo?
So the "Demo" part is just for the new content that was supposed to be for the full release of 0.3.4 (which is right after the Beach events). You can expect the rest of the demo within a month or two! Time isn't on my side, but I will work as much as I can on it
sweet ty
This is definitely one of if not the best VN I have played. I am just wondering what is the timeframe for the next update? Great work :)
The arch with the running competition is fucked up. I haven't been this mad in a long time. Those 4 stupid cunts, I don't want them in the game at all. They just bullying the mc, not just hit on him, but arrogantly bullying him.They haven't done anything useful yet, and they're not worth anything by themselves, so why does the mc just put up with them? Fuck these hoes. Just fuckin kill them in the next update.
Give them a chance, lol
No, No. He's Got a Point! 🤣
I've just finished the game. That was a lot of content, it surprised me. Best girl is Sinerva due to having the best backstory and character arc. If there is one flaw (ok, there's more than one) it's the inconsistency of the main character. In one scene he tells one of the loveinterests "I've never lied in my life" and in the next scene he lies to the girls... that kinda irked me a bit, but you (and the MC) did acknowledge it later on in the game (and he becomes more consistent). One other thing is that all the girls are like, "oh, he's so dreamy and handsome... I want his baby!" right away when they meet the MC, making them seem shallow (perhaps it has something to do with the markings on their bellies). I know it's a power fantasy, but I do wish there was a bit more realistic romantic development, instead of "ooooh, he gives me a girl boner and I'm lonely." Not always the case for some of them (Sinerva comes to mind, but like I said, best character arc), but it's for most of them.
And I can't believe I'm saying this, but there are too many girls... and more and more are keep getting introduced (boom, and welcome to the harem, we don't know who you are but welcome to the group). That means not all of them are getting the character development they deserve (besides slightly more advanced background characters). Sometimes it feels like "too many cooks", but in this case it's "too many waifus".
The game feels like it's reaching its climax and there are still girls who haven't had their full character arc yet. Unless there is way more to come... I do hope so. If not, then there are simply put too many girls. Perhaps it would be interesting to see if there will be casualties. I know it's mean to say that I want characters to be killed off, but storywise it would be an interesting development (for the MC as well). Gives the story more danger, gravitas and stakes and such (if I was in the writers chair, I would probably do something like that, but that's me). All in all, I did enjoy it.
7/10 (4 stars)
(Ed, Edd and Eddy, really??? (:-3 , you're showing your age there, hahaha!)
You have a valid argument but I would also argue that most people play these VN for the H content and it becomes frustrating if there is too much content between these moments, and its completely fine if you believe there is too many girls and I agree there could be more depth to each one but wanting them killed off is extreme especially in erotic VN because its a major turn off and can even straight make people drop the game. Look at "Champion of Realms" for example they killed off one of their neko girls and just look at the comments on that one. Nearly ever comment mentions how fucked up the scene was.
Bah, I have to agree with @Nederbeest, bro. There are a lot of Waifu's, but many of them don't have a decent background to call attention, they are shallow and superfluous characters! I can count on my fingers that there are a few Waifu that caught my attention in this game, one of them was Seraph 13, Zoe "zumbi girl", Daughter of Rosalyn "The Vampire", Alyssa and Sinavera!
For the rest, I just erased it from my mind, it's there just to weigh the game and nothing else, and if one of them died, it wouldn't be much missed. Since most events with this character are the true "Turn off!" with Ex; it would be Jade's event with MC at her book club, where she literally rapes the MC. it's pejorative to say that, but it's true, at that moment, the player didn't have the choice of wanting to follow her route or not. and in the end, she ends up getting pregnant because she wasn't taking the crappy medicine to fight the heat.
Another is, would be the race event against Sora, Man, that was ridiculous, she just teleported throughout the race, without giving the MC a chance to compete, a 500-year-old angel losing in the most ridiculous and idiotic way possible! and as a punishment, you are forced to "Sleep" with Sora and Fuyumi, and once again the player has no choice to refuse this event, I don't know .... that was so ridiculous that I almost dropped the game. and when the beach event on her birthday arrives, I find out that they are both pregnant.
Anyway, I don't know what your issue is with "Champion of Realms" about Emiko's death, and I also don't understand what happened to players who abandoned the game after witnessing her death. I read some reviews and others!
But, I have to agree that it was a heavy scene, even for me who hate Neko Girl's. I found that scene too fucked up, but we have to admit that it gave a huge weight for the MC to change both physically and mentally, and unlike other players who left the game for little things, it simply motivated me to play more.
The difference between the two games is that even adding new girls, "Champion of Realms" comes out ahead since most of the girls added have a background that makes you pay attention, which is where Fall of Angels fails a lot!
The only thing that holds me back in Fall of Angels, besides my few Waifu, is the MC's beef with Zanera with King Maverick!
The one true hero of this game is Sir Reginald Vice count crabby.
did I miss something? I don't remember this scene and I just finished the current build yesterday.
Likely missed a scene, lol
Man this game is so good, it pains me to have to wait so long between updates. Especially with the cliffhanger the last one ended on.
Yay! You released a android version! The fact you acceptEd my request just proves to me how invested you are in this game. Thank you!
its been a while i dont play this game lets see whats new on the history last time i played it ended in the moon event(almost a full spoiler sorry)
can someone tell me the song playing when the mc sings?
Thirteen by TomGossMusic
If I install the game after being rerouted to MEGA, is there a way to get ITCH to recognize the game as installed?
its automatic bro, don't worry about it
What do you mean by that? When I download it from MEGA, I still can't launch it on ITCH.
Once it finishes downloading from MEGA, the file then downloads straight to your computer/laptops downloads file on your PC, you don't need to directly download it from ITCH, files that are directly downloaded from ITCH are always less than 1GB (once over 1GB, it goes to MEGA or other 3rd party sites.)